tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6439120801579614446.post4833265099260609244..comments2011-03-11T18:03:06.473-08:00Comments on The Best Things in Life Aren't Hard to Find: Avatars: Exploration of Gender in the Digital AgeBeccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15721211032797019129noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6439120801579614446.post-84584195503274932092010-06-08T09:42:50.633-07:002010-06-08T09:42:50.633-07:00Excellent comments from Heather, which I second.Excellent comments from Heather, which I second.Gideon Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282494104976426309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6439120801579614446.post-64834870339795690262010-06-02T12:02:08.896-07:002010-06-02T12:02:08.896-07:00Interesting Becca! Couple things: I'm assumin...Interesting Becca! Couple things: I'm assuming your post The Digital Hermaphrodite is your "head" post. But maybe not? Maybe you could try defining that more, like saying specifically "This post is about my thesis" and "This post will be about this". I was a little confused when I jumped into your posts about where to start. Also, maybe you could use block quotes? All of the quotes you use are really interesting, but blocking them would just make the post easier to get through. Seems like you have good solid research.<br /><br />Here's a problem I ran into. Dr. Burton wanted me to have more solid "stakes" in my argument. What are the implications for what you are arguing? Why is it important for us to know that the blogosphere will become just like a transvestite theater? Don't get me wrong, I think your arguments are very interested, well-supported, and valid. Just a thought!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01940193140033260260noreply@blogger.com